Aloha
This is the last project from this summer’s class. Each student wrote a short paragraph about “places I’d like to visit.”
Do you see any errors? The previous post about common grammar errors may be helpful to identify them.
1. I wanna visit mainland. If I visit mainland, i’d enjoy Disney World. I’ve never been to American’s Disney before. One thing that I’m worried about is food. Because my favorite food is Japanese food, and I’d have to pay a lot of money to eat Japanese food in mainland.- Rinka
2. I want a visit Dubai because it is looks fun. I’d enjoy to see the F1 race in F1 circuit because I like race games so I want to see a real race. Also I want to go to Burj Khalifa because it’s most high tower in the world. However Dubai’s every items is high price so I have to take much money. – Taro
3. If I go to UK.I will feel very excited because I have never seen the British view and culture. I want to know what British food and living habits. It can bring me a different experience.
Although I was looking forward to the food there, at the same time I thought I was worried about the different food cultures. And I worried about the social security there because I have seen on the Internet that there are a lot of homeless people and social security problems in UK.-Koto
4. I would like to visit to Rapa Nui, because I have a friend from there and researched about Easter Island these day. I would like to see Moai. It seems to be magnificent and amazing views.
However, if I go there, it takes 2days to get there from Japan. It makes me exhausted. – Hami
5. On Saturday, I woke up late and took it easy in the morning. I went to “Kitchen Umeko” to get a bento for lunch and went to “Ross Dress for Less” to see some clothes.
At night, my apartment manager invited me to go to the Bon Dance at Papaikou Hongwanji Mission. I was surprised to see Japanese Culture in Hawaii. -Hiromi
The mistakes are in bold letters. Can you figure out why and what should be the correct English?
1. I wanna visit mainland. If I visit mainland, i’d enjoy Disney World. I’ve never been to American’s Disney before. One thing that I’m worried about is food. Because my favorite food is Japanese food, and I’d have to pay a lot of money to eat Japanese food in mainland.- Rinka
2. I want a visit Dubai because it is looks fun. I’d enjoy to see the F1 race in F1 circuit because I like race games so I want to see a real race. Also I want to go to Burj Khalifa because it’s most high tower in the world. However Dubai’s every items is high price so I have to take much money. – Taro
3. If I go to UK. I will feel very excited because I have never seen the British view and culture. I want to know what British food and living habits. It can bring me a different experience.
Although I was looking forward to the food there, at the same time I thought I was worried about the different food cultures. And I worried about the social security there because I have seen on the Internet that there are a lot of homeless people and social security problems in UK.-Koto
4. I would like to visit to Rapa Nui, because I have a friend from there and researched about Easter Island these day. I would like to see Moai. It seems to be magnificent and amazing views.
However, if I go there, it takes 2days to get there from Japan. It makes me exhausted. – Hami
5. On Saturday, I woke up late and took it easy in the morning. I went to “Kitchen Umeko” to get a bento for lunch and went to “Ross Dress for Less” to see some clothes.
At night, my apartment manager invited me to go to the Bon Dance at Papaikou Hongwanji Mission. I was surprised to see Japanese Culture in Hawaii. -Hiromi * There are no errors. Sometimes students overcorrect.